Envy her,
seated quiet comfort?
The rigid
fixed in fashion
to extend meaning.
At pains, conspiring,
but bent on appreciation
for all things them (us?).
Would that work
and worry were
beneficent bonds.
A recourse to rigidity
would arouse such hope.
As is, all days
tar quiet comfort
an ungrateful lot.
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I find it intriguing this verse has over 50 likes and not a single comment? It says so much, yet asked me to read and re-read it, seeking, asking, curious. That quiet comfort, so uneasy lies, waiting…apparently.
yet I could be misinterpreting. Perhaps the quiet comfort and rigidity have another connotation?
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The rigid? They are a type of people…the seated quite comfort? Well, she is another type of “people”.
This quote might illuminate the issue: “All of humanity’s problems stem from man’s inability to sit quietly in a room alone”
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Except those of us who are quite happy to do so 😉
Thanks for that though, because it does illuminate the verse better.
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This is absolutely beautiful. You’re an amazing writer. Keep it up! Please
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Thank you for the kind words, friend. I appreciate you reading and hope you continue to do so 🙂
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