We would cuddle often together in mutual admiration, each inspired by the other. Plastered off our desire and nuzzling comfort to avoid the day. Well, what of places to go and things to see? We break once or twice but a cold vacuum stills the air and harms the void. No, no, no..we won't leave this; there's none other. What a picture of the future, this present, an idea I'd put into song. I hope that we might sing this song together, and let it echo through the chambers of our hearts.
Oh, how I love lazy Sundays. This is a truly beautiful piece.
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Aw, this is a sweet, romantic poem. It feels like the narrator is speaking to me, as well as his lover. π I enjoyed the spacial imagery and how you represented their connection through it.
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Thank you, I appreciate those kind and thoughtful words. I’m glad the connection came through, because a potent one influenced the writing.
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No probs. The emotions within are very tender and strong, so your influence was a good choice. π
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perfect for Romantic Tuesday π A Lovely notion, to stay a-bed all day in each other’s Love.
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Indeed π
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Ah, how lovely this is
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You captured the Sunday feeling perfectly π Beautiful.
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Everyone’s mentioned the sunday feeling.. but I think what’s the most important thing here is that theyte cuddling together on the couch.
There are only a few things better than cuddling with your lady or romantic interest. Excellent work.
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Thank you for the thoughtful comments!
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No problem. Thanks for the relaxing prose.
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Lazy Sundays we all love it, right?
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Loooshe this so much
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Thank you (I’m unsure of what Looshe means, but I’m rolling with it π )
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Lol I apologise, got a little excited tried to emphasise ‘loveeee’ π x
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Your excitement is genuine and appreciated π Thank you for the kind thoughts and for reading.
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