The whole universe
in this tight space.
If not the whole,
at least we ourselves.
Complexity exposed
and manipulated
for benefit or
benefitting needs.
The need to express
the whole of lives.
The lives we lead
in this tight space.
If you choose the “preformatted” option in the post editor screen (where it says heading 1, click that drop down and it’s on bottom), you have more control over the spacing, etc. That’s how I post my work
Thank you! Ironically, it’s the piece most outside my general style. It’s nice to get positive feedback on it and encourages me to be a little more experimental. Thanks again for reading.
Nice poem.
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Thank you 🙂
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Umm really nice poem but how did you get to write it like that or is that a picture, I’d really love to know for the sake of my blog.
Thank you
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If you choose the “preformatted” option in the post editor screen (where it says heading 1, click that drop down and it’s on bottom), you have more control over the spacing, etc. That’s how I post my work
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Thank you
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Very skillfully composed poetry!
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Thank you, Noora. I take the composition seriously so it means a lot to hear that.
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I like this a lot. 🙂
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Thank you! Ironically, it’s the piece most outside my general style. It’s nice to get positive feedback on it and encourages me to be a little more experimental. Thanks again for reading.
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My pleasure.
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Thanks for noticing Morning Concert. This one rocks.
MFJ
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My pleasure and thank you for the comment friend
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Great work here
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Thank you friend. I appreciate the kind words.
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Great poem!
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I love the poem, the irony of a universe and the tight space!
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Despite it’s indefinite size, it sure feels tight at times…no?
Thank you for the kind words, friend.
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This is beautiful
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Thank you, I appreciate the kind words.
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I love the circular nature of this poem, saying something so poignant, yet so indelible.
—I think? lol
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you’re not certain its either poignant or indelible? 🙂
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Im never sure Im interpreting you correctly, so I mean indelible. sometimes I take you too seriously ..
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You’re always close when it comes to the intensity I’m trying to convey….closer than I am most of the time.
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Thats good to know. …, although I doubt I am closer than you are yourself. 😉
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