Heartbeats and shadows
patter, beating out the cadence
of the ancient lover's cry.
Tense is the refrain
secret endearments claim,
a melting of resolve
does not such deceit absolve.
Were all our failings so,
better that we might perceive
enchantments and phantoms.
Oh! The tacit consent
of sweet and innocent,
erectors of sturdy lore
set to avert the bore.
And then when uncovered,
pitiful in undulations,
left to strip a quiet thrill.
The last of those to feel
may know of shadows real,
such as is plain
for lovers without name.
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Wow this is great! You should definitely submit to Highlandpoetry.com it is free and we’d love to have poetry like this up there! Thank you also for following my blog, I appreciate it!
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My pleasure re: the follow.
I’m working on a few pieces now and I may just send them over. Is there a submission link or contact info on the page?
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Yes there is a submit button on the site.. Looking forward to reading your works!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you Deborah. I’m happy you enjoyed it. It’s a little blend of style (some rhyme, some free verse). Was not entirely sure how that would work out but it felt organic when I was writing it.
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You just have a wonderful way with words. It’s rather like walking down a meandering path that opens into a gorgeous, green meadow filled with spectacular views. There’s a reward at the end!
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That’s one of the nicer things anyone has ever said about my writing. Thank you very much for the kindness. If you keep reading, I’ll do my best to deliver good work 🙂
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Beautiful ❤ well done
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Thank you Nadine! I appreciate the kind words and I am glad you enjoyed it.
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There’s something exuberant in the lines, Shakespearian.
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That’s high praise my friend. Thank you for reading.
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I guess you were in the right mood when writing this. Emotional substance. Inspiration has so many shades, positive and not, even despair can be in there. The words can flow into a mind against our will now and then. It’s similar to precipitations in nature.
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Indeed it is. There’s a poem for every emotion and for every emotion a poem! 🙂
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Hello,
Thank you for following my blog darling, and for sharing your beautiful play with feeling… I fell into each little story… and it was wonderful ❤
Wishing you a magical day ❤
Lots of Love,
Hayley ❤
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My pleasure and thank you for the thoughtful comment, it is much appreciated 🙂
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Excellent poetry.
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Thank you. And thank you for always commenting thoughtfully…it’s because of people like you that I continue to work hard on my pieces 🙂
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Thank you for the interest in my blog for it brought me here! I look forward to following and reading more of this striking poetry.
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Thank you for the kind words! I do hope you enjoy my work and I look forward to reading yours. 🙂
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I certainly do and I hope you enjoy what yo read here as well.
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