49 thoughts on “Forceful gales

  1. It is a beautiful poem.
    The forceful gale prepares and does not molest its target the sea that flows . Nor the Hull that stays on the ground held tightly by nature…..but the man made ship is vulnerable….to natural forces …sadly true. This tempest should not arise in human hearts , if it does , it will wreck the ship . Forceful Gale….is such a non pejorative term , but the metaphor does the job of indicating a wreck so subtly.
    Well done !

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